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  1. Feb 12th, 2007, 9:42 am #1
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    Unhappy Help me write a welcome header please

    I tried, tried toooo hard, but I am not able to get the welcome header guest message as I would like. May be becuase english is not my native language.

    Here is my temporary message inspired from another photo site. Could you please help me writing a neat and sweet welcome header message

    Thanks in advance for your help

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    Quote Originally Posted by sagar View Post
    I tried, tried toooo hard, but I am not able to get the welcome header guest message as I would like. May be becuase english is not my native language.

    Here is my temporary message inspired from another photo site. Could you please help me writing a neat and sweet welcome header message

    Thanks in advance for your help
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    Just corrected a couple of minor things, but you basically got it yourself. Your English is not nearly as bad as you think.
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    Looks good to me, but personally I would edit these two points further:

    participate in a Photo-Per-Week project, enter photo contests and assignments
    Looks more professional


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    thanks a lot for correction, here is another version, help me choose one from the two:

    Welcome to ShutterWeek!
    We are a community of friendly people interested in discussing all aspects of photography and learning from each other.

    We have Photographer of the month – a monthly photography challenge and Photo a Week - ongoing weekly assignment to participate in. You can share your photos with friendly community for critique and feedback or discuss tips, techniques and issues revolving around photography. We offer 100MB free photo galleries for hosting your photography work and Resource Library for publishing member-written photo equipments reviews, articles, photo essays and travelogues.

    Registration is free and we ask nothing in return, so please join our community today!
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    ShutterWeek is FREE. Register with ShutterWeek to:

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    I suggest a combination -

    Welcome to ShutterWeek!
    We are a community of friendly people interested in discussing all aspects of photography and learning from each other.

    Enjoy the benefits of membership with us, such as:
    1. Photographer of the month – a monthly photography challenge
    2. Photo-per-week - an ongoing weekly assignment to participate in.
    3. Share your photos with a friendly community for critique and feedback or discuss tips, techniques and issues revolving around photography.
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    5. A resource Library for publishing member-written photo equipment reviews, articles, photo essays and travelogues.
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    7. Much more!

      Registration is free and we ask nothing in return, so please feel free to join our community today!
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    thank you so much, I am using this version on the site now
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    Glad I could be of help.
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