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    Hi Guys and Girls

    Was just wondering if you could give a quick review on this site for me which I will be using for my Content and Article writing services.

    The design is intentionally simple as I did not want an all singing all dancing website, just one that works and is to the point if you know what I mean..

    I still have to do the contact page, but the rest of the site is complete. Only took me about an hour to get this done and online, so let me know what you think

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    The site looks good. It is clean, neat and to the point.

    Just one small point - On the home page you sometimes say 'we" and sometimes say "I". Are you to be the only writer or do you have a team?

    Now, Get that contact form up so someone can order

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    Quote Originally Posted by kentuckyslone View Post
    The site looks good. It is clean, neat and to the point.

    Just one small point - On the home page you sometimes say 'we" and sometimes say "I". Are you to be the only writer or do you have a team?

    Now, Get that contact form up so someone can order
    Thanks for pointing that out slone, I am so used to writing for my hosting company where there is me and staff that I tend to write we. Has now been changed to "I" and contact page has now been uploaded.

    Thank you

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    I will definitely place an order on your new site as soon as I receive the other article we discussed.

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    Good job mate!! I found it awesome. Good luck to you.
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    I have subscribed to this thread I may be able to use you later on for some slight work after our site is finished.

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    Good job Justin. Hopefully this service you're providing will stick and you'll enjoy providing articles for good long time :-)

    Also, on the services and pricing pages you are still using we/us. But other than that. I liked reading your site. Keep up the good work.

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    I used Justin's service and I am well satisfied with his work. I would recommend him to anyone - and I never recommend something or someone lightly

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    Quote Originally Posted by kentuckyslone View Post
    I used Justin's service and I am well satisfied with his work. I would recommend him to anyone - and I never recommend something or someone lightly
    Thank you K-Slone. Much appreciated

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    Looks pretty good, but if you gonna put the words "Professional Writer" on your site, you better get to checking a little deeper, and proof reading. I didn't read the whole site, but if I found two, I am sure there are more:

    1 - On the "Home" page, you opened a quotation, but did not close it.

    2 - On the "Services" page, under "Letter Writing" you are offering to write letters to people's Backs, but I am assuming you meant Bank.

    I know it is hard to proof read ones own work, you might want to have someone else check out your work. After all, professional writers have editors!!! LOL

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    I am using Firefox/Linux. I do not know if this is intentional/necessary but your "Professional Writer" comment on the upper right hand corner creates a scroll bar. It would blend a lot better and look more professional if this scroll bar was not there. You can make the font one size smaller or use CSS to remove the scrollbars.

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    I like your site, clean and simple.

    I noticed you are using contact form script from Kontactr.com, me too use their script but on my form there is no link appears for their website, but on your website I can see an image saying "Powered by contactr". You should remove it.

    Everything else is perfect

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    You've used a free template? I think I've seen a similar website design...

    Besides that, good luck with your new website.
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    Clean look. Right to the point. Price is right too. I will keep in mind. Good luck!

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